Okay this painfully ugly, and has a lot of mistakes, but it's an important step where I'm working out several things. Firstly I wanted to test if I could make my inked clouds work (answer was no ). I also wanted to test the rimlight on the hair, some sub surface scattering of the light, and just get a general sense of the colour scheme. No real cuts or rendering was employed here, I just wanted get it down quick and see the results.