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Submitted: July 5, 2009
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Savageland Coloursby ~davidyardin

Cartoons & Comics / Traditional Media / Cartoons / Drawings

Pencils, ink on Bristol Board, and my first colour piece done with my new Wacom tablet in Photoshop.

All art by me.

Critique by !BrandonPilcher Oct 7, 2010, 5:42:38 PM

Most of the elements in this piece look fantastic. I see nothing wrong with the anatomy of the human characters or the coloring, and the concept of scantily clad women in a prehistoric jungle is always awesome even if it has been drawn many times before. However, as an amateur dinosaur nerd, I do have some comments on the T. Rex. His mouth looks off to me; perhaps it is too wrinkly. Secondly, the palms of his hands should face each other instead of pronating like what you've drawn here. Thirdly, the lower arms are too long, giving them an anthropomorphic appearance. I recommend you look at skeletal diagrams of T. Rex, as well as paleoart depicting it, if you want to get your dinosaur anatomy right.

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Critique by *Wager Sep 24, 2010, 1:25:59 PM

I have to agree with the past critique in that this does not need a critique. The female figures of Rogue and Storm are beautiful. They each hold their own body language that go with their characters. Rogue a little more relaxed, Storm a bit tense and critical. Even their facial expressions support their body language and the mood of the piece. The shadows and colors are right on, everything runs together perfectly. The T-Rex's placement in the background brings the whole dynamic of this piece together and gives it that much more emotion.

Awesome piece, it should definitely become a print in the future. Something worth buying